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Post by buckshotguy on Jan 6, 2006 22:21:37 GMT -5
to listen to a soundtrack well reading- open another Internet window and paste THIS: polarium.nintendods.com/index2.html in the adresbar. then click go and come back to read the story. remember to have your volume on!In the beginning- Salvaman of Game Planet- went to the space academy, where he met marioman and MrJake. they became fast friends. Salvaman was made 4 star general, GP highest. marioman took comand over the airforce- and Mr Jake was the comander of enemy inteligence and troop postioning. then one day something terrible happened! (the pic might take a little while to show up)back at gamers planet:then the bad news came- the evil qween turn WW into a baron desert!
well salva was preparing for a counter attack- marioman's air force was dealing out damage. the ACWW's general, Booker, got to gether a small army- but they where suffering heavy losses. the SpitStars where droping bombs on the SlobberSlashers- but there number never seemed to dwindle...but when marioman and salva (along with 15,000 ground troops) arived at WW- they where shocked! it looked nothing like it did 24 hours ago. there where GP spitstars crashed and burning.... not a single GP starship in there air. "Why!" said salva, " We sent in 300 starships! and they are all crashed!" the evil qweens army and marioman where no where to be seen. End of Chapter One (please leave feedback)
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Post by buckshotguy on Jan 8, 2006 21:29:18 GMT -5
did you use the sound track?
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Post by buckshotguy on Jan 8, 2006 21:31:09 GMT -5
remember- anyone can make drawings for this story. just post them at idea board! if they are good- ill use em!
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Post by YourClone on Jan 9, 2006 22:34:02 GMT -5
You should learn to spell, no offence.
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Post by buckshotguy on Jan 10, 2006 10:57:24 GMT -5
yeah.... i should one of these days..... but im to busy making these wonderful storys! (of yeah... now i see it. i spelled "queen" qween)
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Post by oddeye0segag on Jan 10, 2006 16:52:04 GMT -5
did you use the sound track? I didn't need to. I just popped open my DS and chose which song in Polarium I wanted to listen to.(the tutorial soundtrack.) Make more. I want to see what happens.(nice job too.)
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Post by buckshotguy on Jan 10, 2006 16:55:52 GMT -5
thanks...
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Post by salva193 on Jan 11, 2006 17:40:11 GMT -5
you did an outstanding job! make more! ;d
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Post by buckshotguy on Jan 11, 2006 17:42:47 GMT -5
chapter two is being made right as we speak....
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Post by patsfan12 on Jan 26, 2006 20:27:09 GMT -5
You should learn to spell, no offence. God YC Its called positive feedback
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Post by doglover56 on Feb 20, 2006 21:13:58 GMT -5
i loved it i listined to the music link you put on there great job!
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